(Ch 12 updated and finished)
Okay, my thoughts on the matter of my complicated writing: I think it's impossible to change your style. I realized that I should make a little more effort to explain certain things, however. And finally, the magic of editing will make this novel light years of better once it's all finished. It may also gain significant length. But if the gentle reader has any questions as they read any chapters, they should leave a specific-as-possible comment, which I will know of immediately due to the magic of email notification.